
Here is my first CLIMBING RHYME POEM:
Fungus
(“Easy, greaz-y, there’s a fungus among us.” Gary Moore)
Fungus in a tree
teases me to see
if I will fly to munch
mushrooms for lunch.
A bunch of roots
scrambling for my boots
climbing ‘tween my toes
to close the gap
of sap and growth,
lap dancing for me.
Look at this poem closely. The rhymes are not only at the end, but appear throughout in different places, like in African chants called g-hazels. There is a long history in poetry of rhymes being used in work chants such that one person starts a chant to set a rhythm to make the work go more smoothly and entertain other workers. Then the poem is handed off to another worker who keeps the rhythm but adds to the rhyme. In Africa, workers built reputations for being excellent rhymers or great game players in this form of poetry competition.
The CLIMBING RHYME has it’s history in Burma and the Burmese language only has one syllable words, but here in the US adaptations are needed.
Here is a graph for this poem.
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