I gave up my shell while with my family
.
Under my shell, I’m
vulnerable; to fam’ly,
speed, criticism…
(willing to trust, anyway…)
Jeanne Poland's Poetry Blog
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I gave up my shell while with my family
.
Under my shell, I’m
vulnerable; to fam’ly,
speed, criticism…
(willing to trust, anyway…)
10 Apr 2014 1 Comment
in Family Tags: brushing off competition's fangs, criticism, deer and hawks, gathered prompts, Hutchinson Lane, journey, past trees, poems, porcupines, rhymes, stumbled, sure-footed, wandered down the hill, washed the dust away
I wandered lonely down the hill
Past trees, porcupines , deer and hawks
Brushing off competition’s fangs …
Gathered prompts
Scribed poems
Posted rhymes
Winced at criticism
Stumbled on sand
Washed the dust away
Found Hutchinson Lane;
Sure-footed
Open hearted journey.