Riddle#10 Fungus

fungus on a tree

Here is my first CLIMBING RHYME POEM:

(“Easy, greaz-y, there’s a fungus among us.” Gary Moore)

Fungus in a tree
teases me to see
if I will fly to munch
mushrooms for lunch.

A bunch of roots
scrambling for my boots

climbing ‘tween my toes
to close the gap
of sap and growth,

lap dancing for me.

Look at this poem closely. The rhymes are not only at the end, but appear throughout in different places, like in African chants called g-hazels. There is a long history in poetry of rhymes being used in work chants such that one person starts a chant to set a rhythm to make the work go more smoothly and entertain other workers. Then the poem is handed off to another worker who keeps the rhythm but adds to the rhyme. In Africa, workers built reputations for being excellent rhymers or great game players in this form of poetry competition.
The CLIMBING RHYME has it’s history in Burma and the Burmese language only has one syllable words, but here in the US adaptations are needed.
Here is a graph for this poem.
Line 1 xxxxA
Line 2 xxAxA
Line 3 xBxBxC
Line 4 xxxC
Line 5 xCxD
Line 6 xxxxD
Line 7 xxxxE
Line 8 xExF
Line 9 xFxx
Line 10 Fxxxx

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Catherine Johnson
    Apr 07, 2013 @ 19:43:16

    I love this, Jeanne. Thanks for introducing a new form for me.


  2. JMPoland21van
    Apr 08, 2013 @ 09:42:57

    I need to credit Joy Acey’s marvelous research for this information. Thank you Joy. Were it not for you, I’d still be stuck on sonnets.


  3. Lamar
    Apr 10, 2013 @ 07:26:02

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  4. JMPoland21van
    Apr 10, 2013 @ 09:41:00

    What an intriguing comment.
    Tell me more.


  5. jeannepoland
    Sep 30, 2017 @ 10:53:07

    Reblogged this on The Vibrant Channeled Creator and commented:

    Time to practice a climbing rhyme poem!


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