Off the Beaten Track

I’d rather be
Off the beaten track.
Eyes wide.
Breaths deep.
Searching.
Listening for
Virgin sounds’
Music.
3/2/12
All rights reserved
Jeanne Poland



1 Comment (+add yours?)

  1. jmpoland21van
    Mar 03, 2012 @ 10:19:04

    Therese Broderick commented on Off the Beaten Track.

    in response to jmpoland21van:

    I’d rather be Off the beaten track. Eyes wide. Breaths deep. Searching. Listening for Virgin sounds’ Music. 3/2/12 All rights reserved Jeanne Poland

    Wow! This poem sent shivers down my spine. Great last image & phrase. I just read some press releases from NASA, so this poem of yours made me think of the current explorations in outer space — being “off the beaten track” means, to me, leaving our own solar system to discover the “virgin music” of new galaxies (stars really do make music!).

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